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This webbing method outline was completed with Professor Drowe, and it helped me to organize my thoughts and gather specific information from all sources related to social media and identity. I had included any details from the various articles we have read that could be helpful in my writing. My claims had been drawn from this webbing method once I was able to identify where I specifically wanted to focus my attention within social medias relation to identity.
My revision process started with the comments made by my peer review and teacher, I had addressed what certain suggestions were made and adjusted my essay from there. One of the big things I needed to change was, further developing my own claims while adding more detail or transitional sentences connecting my claims to the evidence I had included. This project helped me to refine more skills related to the course objectives in ways of recognizing mistakes or things I could change in my writing, and peer reviewing assistance. I feel confident in my final essay with all of the time I had dedicated to it through the revision process and formulating my original essay.
